An Original Bright Story

Do you want to know why is Kaelynn so
engrossed with that piece of paper?

Its Kristine's short essay.
One day, there were 3 lamps the first lamp name is Mimmy, The second lamp name is pipy, The 3rd lamp name is lily, One day, The three lamps went to the field, The first lamp said "I'm hungry" The seocnd lamp said "I'm very hungry" The third lamp said "I'm very very hungry"

Which is amazing for a seven year old who wrote this essay without any spelling mistakes. OK, I can dismiss the commas and the weird Capital letters but this is very very, good.